Aisa Damayanti K. (20131111029)
Tri Kartini Kartika B. (20131111080)
Twas like a Maelstrom, with a notch
by Emily Dickinson
Twas like a maelstrom, with a notch
That nearer, every day,
Kept narrowing its boiling wheel
Until the agony
Toyed coolly with the final inch
Of your delirious hem-
And you dropt, lost
When something broke-
And let you from a dream-
As if a Goblin with a gauge-
Kept measuring the hours-
Until you felt your second
Weigh, helpless, in his paws-
And not a sinew - stirred - could help,
And sense was setting numb-
When God - remembered - and the fiend
Let go, then, overcome-
As if your sentence stood - pronounced-
And you were frozen led
From Dungeon’s luxury of doubt
To Gibbets, and the dead-
And when the film had stitched your
eyes
A creature gasped “Reprieve”!
Which Anguish was the utterest - then -
To perish, or live?
In this poem, We can imagine that “a
Maelstrom” is a nightmare that nearer come every day.
The bad dreams that make human feel the deep pain. When people got a nightmare that bring us to the
scariest things and it feel like we cannot speak any words. The first two stanzas describe as if you are being trapped in a
huge whirlpool. And then you drowned, delirious with the pain until you had
been pulled under all the way to the last inch of clothes. Just if we wake up
from the nightmare because there is something that break the dream, it is a
very near miss.
The
next two stanzas describe another nightmare. There is a big goblin that have
“paws” in its hand. The goblin measures your suffering with a gauge, a minute
until an hour its make you numb so that you cannot move a muscle to set
yourself free. We often have this nightmare. The bad dream that make people fighting
to move or even to shout out for help but unable to. The devil let us go when
God comes. Thing that the human remembered at the last second is the Goblin
becomes the devil “the Fiend,” as if you were captured by Satan and carried,
helpless, into Hell. The terrible experience is as if you’d been sentenced to
death but then left in the dungeon about your future.
Certainly,
there is no optimism in this poetry. Its like someone who giving up for life
when they are trapped in a trouble. What all of these events have is the
feeling of helplessness. You know for sure your moment of death is at hand. As
if “frozen,” you go, and as you are hanged and your film of eyes was over. someone
comes running up gasping “’Reprieve’!” you can still saved at the last second
from a hideous death. In the end of the poetry there are two words “perish” and
“live”. We do not know is the person still alive or pass away right there after
they got that bad experience. The sufferer doesn’t have power to avoid pain or
to inspire her rescue. Rescue seems as inexplicable as pain. After all that
nightmare, it seems like that person was
give in when they are trapped in the bad things. That person become too pessimism and no willing to run
from the fear, just being helplessly.
Clear for your analysis guys . Easy to understand
BalasHapusAjeng&encik
( Handoko 20131111030 & Mila kamilia 20131111003)
BalasHapusi think your analysis is clear enough and we get the point that actually this poetry attempts to explain the experince of despair to an uncomprehending auditor, thereby inviting the reader into the experince so as to come to an understanding of it.
Its clear for me to read it and even to understand about it because you made a clear staement that this is about dream where happened in this poem. Great for both of you
BalasHapusDiah & San
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BalasHapusIt is easy to understand for my group. this explanation tells the psimistics and the explanation refer to moral issue.
BalasHapusfanda, siti
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BalasHapusIt's very clear analysis , because you analyze it point by point . We really understand it
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BalasHapusgood analysis guys because we can get the point :-)
BalasHapusannis and dwi
It's very clear analysis , because you analyze it point by point . We really understand it
BalasHapusNillah selvy maghfurah & nurul hikmah
It's very clear analysis , because you analyze it point by point . We really understand it
BalasHapusNillah selvy maghfurah & nurul hikmah
This analysis its good and clear and the explanation it's easy to understand..
BalasHapusits really interest poem, due to the nightmare cases. Good Job guys... :)
BalasHapusFikria Muzakki and Destawati Cardini